Tuesday, August 02, 2005

The Unrequited Love



She smiled back at it
The being in the pond
It smiled back at her
Branches all and frond

When she moved to touch it
It moved back to touch her
She was delighted in her fortune
At last she found a peer

It stood by her in sunny days
It stood by her in rain
At times she thought she was alone
But It took away her pain

"At last I found my one true love"
It smiled and said "Me too"
It's expression reflected hers
A glowing tender hue

Then one day she felt amiss
Her face,hands wilting brown
She didn't feel as strong as before
Dead petals on her crown

It looked at her all sad
It's face mirrored her illness
She looked to It for love while in her dying
All It gave was stillness

Finally her body fell
The flower by the pond
Her reflection in the water did the same
An unrequited bond

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Touching and light as a breeze

Fiona1 said...

Thank you....do you have a poem to share too?

carinasuyin said...

a female narcissus?

carinasuyin said...

Oops sorry, said that because your poem really reminded me of the story of Narcissus with his reflection by the pond :) Here's one of mine...